Chapter 1Done with the Bullet Comments
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I sat in a corner of the library, my eyes fixed on the two figures not far away, sharing a pair of earbuds.
A familiar stream of comments scrolled past the edge of my vision:
[Chill, guys, Leo’s just helping her adjust the volume. He’s not even listening!]
[That’s his childhood friend, Stella. They grew up together. He can’t just embarrass her!]
I offered a faint smile, my gaze dropping back to the book in my lap. I didn't stop turning the pages.
Every time Leo was with another girl, the comments would instantly pop up, a ghostly chorus rushing to explain away the misunderstanding.
They told me he was just a man of few words. That his unreturned messages and cold silences were all just part of his way of loving me.
But I've decided I don't want a man of few words anymore.
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* * *
We’d been dating for two years, and we didn't have a single photo together.
Every time I suggested taking one, he'd say he didn't like putting his private life on display.
And I believed him. After all, the comments were always there to back him up:
[Leo’s the quiet, low-key type. It's true he hates photos, it’s not because he doesn’t care about our girl!]
[The reason he never posts on his feed is because he has over a hundred candid photos of her saved on his phone!]
Time and time again, I let those disembodied reassurances convince me to keep loving him.
Until today.
I watched with my own eyes as Leo took off his varsity jacket and draped it over Stella’s shoulders.
Stella beamed. “Won’t your girlfriend get jealous?”
Leo lit a cigarette, the corner of his mouth twitching into a smirk.
“She won’t.”
I was standing just around the corner, and I heard every word, crystal clear.
The comments dutifully scrolled by, as if offering a comforting pat on the back.
[He's doing this for our girl's own good! If he rejected Stella outright, she’d get suspicious about their relationship and ruin his plan to secretly protect Mia!]
[He’s all bark and no bite! He just doesn’t want Mia to get a reputation for being petty and jealous!]
I stepped out from my hiding spot. When Stella saw me, a flicker of mischief lit up her eyes.
“Mia! You’re here! Want to grab dinner with us?”
I shook my head, my voice flat. “No, thanks. I’m busy.”
Leo glanced at me but said nothing.
My hands were trembling as I walked out of the building, but the comments kept rolling.
[Don’t go, sweetie! Leo was waiting for you to say something!]
[Did you see the look in his eyes? He’s so heartbroken!]
[I bet you anything he’s going to come and apologize tonight!]
But I waited all night, and he said nothing.
Instead, he reposted the voting link for Stella’s dance competition, complete with three little “Go for it!” emojis.
In that instant, I felt like I had been demoted from his girlfriend to just another random follower on his feed.
That night, I posted something on my own story.
No words. Just a single photo.
It was his varsity jacket, draped over the back of a chair in a deserted corner of the library.
The comments on the post started pouring in.
“Isn’t that Leo’s jacket? What’s it doing there?”
But when I returned to the library the next morning, the jacket was still there, untouched.
I almost laughed.
The comments flickered to life again:
[Leo was a wreck last night! He didn’t sleep a wink!]
[He didn’t get the jacket on purpose! He wants our girl to realize he’s upset so she’ll come find him!]
I sat down, carefully folded the jacket, and placed it in a paper bag.
I stuck a sticky note on top:
Here’s your stuff back. Don’t leave it with me again.
The comments went berserk.
[NO!!! MIA, WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!!]
[Don’t be mad anymore, he really, really loves you!!! AHHHHH—]
I didn't look back.
This time, I was betting on myself.
Not the comments, not Leo. Just me.