Chapter 1The $125,000 Mistake
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I was treating some friends to dinner at the new private club my cousin, Leo, was running. When the evening wound down, I flagged down a server. "The check, please. Just put it on Leo’s tab."
The young man nodded, but before he could turn away, a manager I’d never seen before stepped in his path.
She aimed a smile at me that didn't reach her eyes. "Sir, this is a members-only establishment. We don't 'run tabs.'"
A flicker of annoyance. "I'm the owner's cousin. Just let him know."
The manager let out a short, sharp laugh and slapped a leather billfold on the table. Inside was a bill for one hundred and twenty-five thousand dollars.
My eyes scanned the itemized list.
Exclusive Suite Ambiance Curation: $15,000.
Elite Network Integrity Fee: $30,000.
Impromptu Artistic Accompaniment: $25,000.
And on and on, a laundry list of ludicrous service charges.
When did Leo’s place get this brazen?
"What's the matter? Can't pay the bill, so you start name-dropping?" The manager’s eyes raked over me, from my simple watch to my well-worn dress shoes. "I've met plenty of the owner's 'relatives.' None of them have ever been quite so broke, so shameless, and so full of it."
Right there in front of her, I dialed Leo’s number and put it on speaker. "You have ten minutes to get her out of my sight. Or I pull the plug on this whole club."
* * *
Leo's voice crackled through the phone, laced with panic. "Ethan? What's going on? Is there some kind of misunderstanding?"
"A misunderstanding?" I glanced at the manager beside me. Vanessa, according to her name tag. She stood with her arms crossed, a smug smirk playing on her lips, enjoying the show.
"Why don't you ask your star manager what she's been up to?"
I could hear the muffled sound of Leo talking to Vanessa, punctuated by her dismissive, whispered excuses.
"Ethan, look, Vanessa was just following procedure," Leo's voice came back, strained. "Don't give her a hard time. This one's on me…"
"Leo," I cut him off. "I didn't call you to get a free meal. I called you to tell you to handle your employee."
Vanessa must have felt emboldened by whatever Leo whispered to her, because she plucked the phone right out of his hand.
"Listen, sir," she said, her voice dripping with condescension. "Our owner is a kind man, so he won't hold this against you. But the rules of Aura are the rules. Either you settle your bill now, or we'll have to ask you to have a chat with our security team in the back office."
Her voice, amplified by the speakerphone, was arrogant, utterly certain of her victory.
My friends, important partners in my industry, exchanged awkward glances. I'd brought them here tonight to impress them, to give them the best experience at my cousin's place. Instead, my own reputation was being ground into the dirt.
"Fine," I said, ending the call. I looked directly at Vanessa. "I'll pay the bill."
Her smug smirk widened into a triumphant grin.
A few minutes later, Leo himself scurried over, an apologetic smile plastered on his face, though his eyes darted around nervously.
"Ethan, I'm so sorry. Vanessa's new, she doesn't know the ropes," he said, while simultaneously wrapping an arm around Vanessa's waist in a gesture of intimacy.
Vanessa leaned into him, looping her arm through his. Her tone wasn't an apology; it was a declaration of ownership.
"Leo is generous enough to let you call him cousin. But that doesn't give you the right to come in here and act like you own the place. Aura is the culmination of his life's work. It’s not a soup kitchen for freeloaders like you."
With that little speech, she'd painted herself as the valiant defender of her lover and his empire, and me as the pathetic, freeloading parasite.
I almost laughed.
His life's work?
Did she have any idea that this entire club, "Aura," from the brand concept to the architectural design, from the operational philosophy to the very font on the menu—every word, every brick—had come from me?
Leo was just the executor.
Or, to be more precise, the mascot I'd put out front.
Watching the way he looked at Vanessa, a pathetic mix of helplessness and adoration, a cold dread washed over me.
When had my cousin become such a clueless fool?