Chapter 3My Discounted Husband
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"What did you say?"
I leaned over, bringing my ear close to his face.
Carter just let out a muffled groan and rolled over. His phone slid off his chest and fell into the crack between the cushions.
I left it there.
At 7:00 AM, the attending physician did his rounds. He told us Noah's inflammatory markers were dangerously high and he needed a heavy course of IV antibiotics for three full days.
The moment Carter heard "three days," he started nervously rubbing his fingers together.
"Doc, can't you just write a prescription for some oral antibiotics we can take home? It's the same stuff, right?"
The doctor shot him a look of absolute disgust, ignored him entirely, and turned to me.
"Mom, the child had three consecutive severe seizures last night. I highly advise we keep him monitored until his bloodwork clears. As parents, you cannot put a price tag on your child's life."
"You're right, doctor. We will do whatever you recommend."
As soon as the doctor walked away, Carter's face darkened.
"Three days of IV meds is going to be another four grand easily. Plus the bed fees, the nursing fees... we're looking at fifteen thousand dollars out of pocket."
I said nothing.
"Sarah, how much money do you actually have left in your checking?"
"Nothing."
"What about the money from your Etsy store?"
"I spent the last of it covering the rest of Noah's preschool tuition."
He stood up and began pacing the small corridor.
"Well, you need to figure something out. You're resourceful, right? You figured out the deposit last night."
I gripped Noah's medical chart so hard my fingernails nearly pierced the plastic cover.
Carter left for work at 8:00 AM. Before he walked out, he transferred me $1,500, claiming it was for the three days of hospital food and miscellaneous expenses.
I did the math in my head. Three days of three meals from the overpriced hospital cafeteria, plus Noah's liquid diet, was at least $120 a day. That's $360.
Diapers, baby wipes, and a change of clothes from the gift shop would be another two or three hundred.
The remaining thousand was a drop in the bucket against the medical bills.
Even with this, he was applying his discount.
At 10:00 AM, Rachel walked through the sliding doors.
She was holding a basket of fresh fruit. She sat quietly next to me on the vinyl chairs, studying the EKG numbers through the glass.
"Has his fever broken?"
"It's down to a hundred. A little better than last night."
"You haven't slept a wink, have you? Your eyes are completely bloodshot."
I shook my head. I stared at the floor for a long time before finally finding the courage to speak.
"Rachel... that question you asked me last night. How did you know my husband always discounts the money he gives me?"
She paused, the small pairing knife halting mid-air as she peeled an apple.
"Because my ex-husband did the exact same thing."
"He...?"
"Everything was discounted. Rent money, grocery money, pediatrician copays. He always gave me exactly seventy percent. He forced me to figure out the remaining thirty percent on my own."
She handed me a slice of apple.
"I was a stay-at-home mom with no income. Every single time a bill came, I had to swallow my pride and beg him to cover the gap. I thought he was just struggling at work. I lived like a monk for three years, feeling guilty buying myself a five-dollar coffee. Until one day..."
She stopped and looked at me.
"Until what?" I asked.
"I was doing laundry. A receipt fell out of his jeans pocket. It was an annual subscription fee for a private online community. Two thousand, nine hundred and eighty dollars."
"He lectured me over buying a twenty-dollar bottle of face wash, but dropped three grand on an online course."
"What kind of course?"
Rachel put down the knife, unlocked her phone, and scrolled through her photos. She handed it to me.
It was a screenshot of a Discord community landing page.
The background image was a man in a tailored suit holding a heavy bag of cash. Bold letters across the top read:
The 70% Principle: Mastering Financial Dominance in Your Marriage.
The subheadline beneath it made my stomach churn: Give her seventy percent. Keep your leverage. Control the household.
I stared at the glowing screen for what felt like hours.
"What exactly does this group teach?"
"It teaches husbands how to strictly cap their household contributions at seventy percent. If preschool is $4,800, give her $3,000. If rent is $3,500, give her $2,500. No matter what the wife asks for, multiply it by 0.7. Then, feed her a generic excuse: the economy is bad, work bonuses got cut, business expenses are too high."
"The goal is to condition the wife. Make her used to scrambling to cover the difference. Make her afraid to ask for money. Make her feel ashamed for being a financial burden."
My fingertips started to go numb.
"How many men are in this group?"
"When my ex was in it, there were over a hundred. That was two years ago. There are probably way more now."
She swiped to the next photo, showing the community's 'About' section.
"Look closely at the profile picture of the founder."
The avatar was a photo taken from behind. A man in a dark blue button-down shirt, standing in front of floor-to-ceiling office windows. He had a slight slouch in his shoulders, his head tilted just a fraction to the right, his left hand shoved casually into his pocket.
I knew that posture. I knew that shirt. I bought it for him.
It was Carter.
"This guy..." Rachel said softly, "goes by the handle Mr. Markdown. He posts a new module every week, and it's always based on a real-life case study. How he applied the 70% rule, how his wife reacted, and how she eventually panicked and solved the deficit herself."
"He repackages your misery into a curriculum and sells it to hundreds of men. The yearly fee is $2,980. The lifetime VIP membership is $9,800."
I heard my own voice trembling.
"Are you saying... I am his course material?"
Rachel didn't nod or shake her head. She just pocketed her phone, looked me dead in the eye, and said,
"Sarah, I think you need to read it for yourself. See if his 'case studies' match your life."